Lament for Atlantis
Mourn for the lands
Sunk beneath the sea
Lost below the roiling waves
Have you heard the gulls sing?
The sad aching cry
For the beauty which few can remember
Mourn for the land
Scorched beneath the sun
Desolate as the burning sand
Have you watched the sun rise?
The stark killing light
Over the beauty which few can live through
Mourn for the stars
Flung so far away
Spinning above the shattering earth
Have you danced to the song of their light?
The soft glowing music
Of the beauty which few can embrace
Mourn for hte fire
Choked by the fog
Sputtering in the ghostly half-light
Have you breathed with the shooting sparks?
The flames’ dancing passion
For the beauty which few can plunge into
Mourn for the wind
Lost among the clouds
Wandering amidst the mountains’ spires
Have you stood in its rushing maelstrom?
The fast frightening thrill
Of the beauty which few can stare into
[This poem goes along with Lament for the Stars. Maybe they ought to be combined, but I don't think so. They just go together. The influences aren't hard to name -- Lewis, Tolkien, Bryana and Raora, Chesterton... also Ereb Nan, and most particularly for "the girl who sits quietly". Her poetry cries out to me to write, write, write, in hopes of recapturing some of what she captures. Her prose also calls for poetry, as her laughter rises in the most unexpected times, adding delight to many a long day at school.]
Toby said,
September 16, 2009 at 8:55 am
love the questions… one “hte”… and I think I’d change the /stark killing/ so it doesn’t read like murder of stars…